Tuesday, February 13, 2007

homely

hard to notice

people passing you by

from there, amid the cracks

and bubble gum concrete

extending from big-box store

to revolving door, weaving corner

to corner convenience

the drone, a buzz of footstep sounds

like pounding the city down

a few more feet

and candidly

hoping the cracks blend in

more than you do

2 Comments:

Blogger Rob Budde said...

anonymous said . . .
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1:42 p.m.  
Blogger ryancreamore said...

Justin, thats really cool stuff dude. I love how you can be so natural and rythmic yet still within a structure, I have no concept of structure. Would love to see more photos, my site is www.spaces.msn.com/members/infearandfaith

12:04 p.m.  

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